Football commentary: describe the action before judging it Practice pathway 1. Names and pronunciation: ____________________ 2. Action location: ____________________ 3. Play sequence: ____________________ 4. Analysis pause: ____________________ 5. Voice handover: ____________________ 6. Error review: ____________________ Worked example Fictional move: minute 62, blue team, right flank, pass into the box, shot wide. Describe location and action first, then a possible pattern. If you cannot identify the shooter, do not guess a name; verify it at the next pause. Review before publishing [ ] The main question has a clear answer. [ ] Claims have a source and date. [ ] Script, sound and pictures agree. [ ] Names, numbers and quotes are checked. [ ] Materials have permission for use. [ ] The transcript or text alternative is reviewed. Project deliverable A reviewed piece, its source sheet and a note explaining what changed.